Principle Of A Journey Poem by lady grace

Principle Of A Journey

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every journey will take some steps
not one but more...to reach the object aimed...

ignorance…let’s swim in it
unawareness... just pretend
tolerance …sometimes needed
philosophy...a sarcastic play...

lack of knowledge...when to resolve?
demon acts...how to prevent?
main beliefs...always prevail
principles...dangerously played...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 27 September 2009

well said lady 10....

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there is a poet in me! 27 September 2009

well written............

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your influence in poetry i sobvious.. good piece.

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Ejaz Khan 27 September 2009

It's very good piece, deep and thought provoking!

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Aziz Alkaabi 28 September 2009

I realize you are trying to tell us in your special and interesting style how we can be fooled by large seas of ignorance we swim in, I could be wrong but this is a good piece.

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Nikunj Sharma 30 September 2009

Some real good principles here, let's swim, pretend, some more steps to reach the objetives.....nice words....u tempted me to write one on the same subject....

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Nikunj Sharma 30 September 2009

Some real good principles here, let's swim, pretend, some more steps to reach the objetives.....nice words....u tempted me to write one on the same subject....

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Obinna Eruchie 29 September 2009

Life is a journey for us to proceed with careful steps to make it worthwhile and peaceful. Insightful.

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Eyan Desir 28 September 2009

That's lady grace and her poems...... good write

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Marieta Maglas 28 September 2009

Excellent rational abstract poem.What can I say? ...10++++++++++

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