every journey will take some steps
not one but more...to reach the object aimed...
ignorance…let’s swim in it
unawareness... just pretend
tolerance …sometimes needed
philosophy...a sarcastic play...
lack of knowledge...when to resolve?
demon acts...how to prevent?
main beliefs...always prevail
principles...dangerously played...
your influence in poetry i sobvious.. good piece.
I realize you are trying to tell us in your special and interesting style how we can be fooled by large seas of ignorance we swim in, I could be wrong but this is a good piece.
Some real good principles here, let's swim, pretend, some more steps to reach the objetives.....nice words....u tempted me to write one on the same subject....
Some real good principles here, let's swim, pretend, some more steps to reach the objetives.....nice words....u tempted me to write one on the same subject....
Life is a journey for us to proceed with careful steps to make it worthwhile and peaceful. Insightful.
Excellent rational abstract poem.What can I say? ...10++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
well said lady 10....