Treasure Island

Jake Deeds

(5/11/1965 / Arkansas)

Profound


Sometimes....It is not the mountains
in front of you that hinder the path....
but the mountains within you.....

Submitted: Saturday, March 26, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, July 26, 2011

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  • Anthony Burge (4/7/2013 2:19:00 AM)

    I struggle with inner mountains well within range yet hard to scale.
    Profound indeed, short and to the summit. (Report) Reply

  • C.R. Clark (7/24/2011 10:51:00 AM)

    Profound indeed. We often build up in our minds obstacles that are much greater than the actual impediments before us. Excellent write..10..
    Richard (Report) Reply

  • Shadow Girl (5/8/2011 2:21:00 AM)

    Wow short but profound. Said in a few words what some can not say in many. Thanks for your comment also! (Report) Reply

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