I've spanned the edges of echelon's ledges
And languished the austere abyss
From the hue of grey's obscurity
And time's eternal perpetuity
In stone I make my pledges
And intomb it with a kiss...<><
'From the hue of grey’s obscurity And time’s eternal perpetuity' RAB
Beautiful rendition of words in a well encapsulated piece nicely penned with insight. A well expressed thoughts and feelings. Thanks for sharing Jake and do remain enriched.
austere abyss grey's obscurity eternal perpetuity intombing with a kiss. I was wondering about the usage of words and the Coinage of words together.. you are a master of words……. Conveying a lot. Thank you dear poet.. tony
In stone I make my pledges And intomb it with a kiss...[][ Jake Deeds Rhythmic endings of the lines.. i like it very much. the use of words and its meaning. very very nice poem. much better than writing long poems. thank you very much. tony
Sometimes a piece of art has no meaning - and its sheer beauty lays within that fact... As the Mona Lisa Smile. It's the hint of a secret that is so mesmerizing sometimes - and not always its reveal. Your palette of words here create a beautiful mind swirl. The fact that it takes me nowhere is what ravished me so.... In deed a moment well spent - reading this. Thank you...
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I would like to translate this poem
Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal