Promise Of Frozen Pain Poem by Kieran J1996

hey pplz, this is a joint poem between myself and Iron Panda 23. hope u all likee! ! !

Panda:
what i thought was right was wrong
its like there was no effort made
when i stepped upon that frozen pond
it was already too late for me to be saved

Me:
what i though was right was wrong,
guess i left it too late,
Now i cant be saved,
From the icy, burning hate,

Panda:
what i thought was right was wrong
i shouldve never taken that step
we'll now both suffer this burning pain
its something i should regret

Me:
what i thought was right was wrong,
i wish i had'nt hurt you,
Just want a second chance,
a chance to start anew,

Panda (2lines) Me (2lines) :
what i thought was right had backfired
it turned out to be wrong
although, i hurt you, i need your help,
to get through this, im not that strong,

Panda (2lines) Me (2lines) :
if you help me ill get stronger
& ill promise you no more pain
i swear to you, then,
it'lll never happen again,