Provide The Space Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Provide The Space

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Provide the space
Saturday,11th August 2018

Love can never be the story
as it is a gift from an almighty
the person must know about the consequences
if falls in love at once

it might be in a different form
but it is conveyed or informed
for many, it shall be a simple feeling
but from inside it may be killing

the love is differently understood
many may feel it as good
but it is conveyed differently
and picked too instantly

no, love is no lust
but built on trust
that is the prime condition
and builds the permanent relation

let love mushroom
and we must provide the room
space for an adjustment
and for making it as the memorable moment

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

Provide The Space
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2018

Nice. Love redefined. Mainak Chatterjee, Chennai, Aug 12,2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 August 2018

Beautifully written Sir Srikala, Chennai, Aug 12,2018 18

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 August 2018

no, love is no but built on trust Indeed true, sir. Sneha Thiyagarajan, Bangalore, Aug 12,2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2018

welcome julieta asenita 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2018

let love mushroom and we must provide the room space for an adjustment and for making it as the memorable moment Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2018

Nice composition on the nature of love that comes from your vast experience of life and worldly matters. GSP Rao, Hyderabad, Aug 12,2018

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