Quantem Connection Poem by Rachel Butler

Quantem Connection

Rating: 4.8


(Dedicated to the unknown gardener)



To it true.
Have all my good intentions vanished?
Has he with the distance of half the world
hypnotized me with his magnetism that
brings his presence to me on an electric wave?

Never to, believe the banter,
he is the most wicked and passionate of men -
bawdy with the boys, holding me tenderly and calm.

He loves my voice,
my ways intrigue.
Love the regularities
not the irregularities, I plead.

Penetrating, he probes my oceans deep.
Self cannot give up self so soon.
He has me closer and then mercilessly,
forgotten.

Sparrow

Monday, October 24, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Renu Kakkar 30 September 2015

Fantastic, Romanticism balanced with realism.

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Kanav Justa 24 December 2013

thats brillaint work, , , well done, , ,

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Charles Darkly 27 January 2012

How I would love to fly to Ireland and chat over a cup of tea. Our kindred souls could use it. Fantastic, probably my favorite thus far.

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Matt Mooney 27 October 2011

There is a certain frisson felt on reading this poem.Your feeling is explicit and revealing in the secret realm of romantic love, with a little note of cool realism in the last two lines.

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Kee Thampi 26 October 2011

sophistry...to He loves my voice, my ways intrigue. Love the regularities not the irregularities, I plead.

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