Subfusc  death Poem by Rachel Butler

Touching heartfelt lamentations for the body whereas the liberated soul enjoys the bliss of Nirvana.

It makes me sad to read this poem Rachel, my thoughts and prayers are with you. I realize by the details you have given above that the young man was just a bit older than my son, and it is ever so tragic to someone in the prime life to pass on as he has done. Be strong and may God be with you. I know it is not easy to bear this.

Death indeed is a sad song of separation. Sympathy to you dear Rachael!

Interesting poem Rachel. (RAB) You have a typo in the last line. (never abandons (its) duty to us all. The pronoun is possessive for afterlife. You might put a cap on Mortality as the beginning of a sentence. Reversals in the sentence always set me back a bit. (Noun, verb, object of the verb) is the natural flow of the English language; it allows for the rhythm of the language to flow naturally. ('Angle of Death' did take the heir. Mortality is my boy to this world ;) . a poet friend RH Peat

Death is only reality of beginning, a wake-up call from dreams to reality... thanks for sharing another beautiful poem, if you get some time read some of my new poems :) ... Asif

Well composed poem -thank you for sharing.............

reach heavenly abode and follow the same path you showed we are follwing you in each step

Death is the final destination for all, we can not do anything. Maybe delay it. Good poem

A tale of life and death, and loss

Death is the ultimate and no matter how it comes we can do nothing about it. Thx for sharing