Question Of My Life Poem by Jingga Hartono

Question Of My Life

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Day and night
I'm asking myself
Standing up in front of mirror
And I say what do you really want for your life, jingga?
What exactly are you looking for?
Love? Success? Or both?
Is it really what you want? Or
Is it freedom?
Is it happiness?
Is it prosperity?
Or inner peace? That you want
I've got a good job
Great friends
Anything runs well but
Why this heart can't be happy?
Why this heart feels anxious?
Am I too long in my comfort zone?
And i'm asking myself
I don't know i can stop asking or not
I don't know I can get the answer or not
Future is a mystery
But now, I don't know who am I
This is not me

Monday, March 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'm still youngg and there are many things that make me afraid to take the decision and also dilemma to face the reality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jingga Hartono 27 March 2016

Thanks Mr. Ernest I hope my inner me can show me what I really want

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Ernest Makuakua 24 March 2016

Love? Success? Or both? Is it really what you want? Or Is it freedom? Is it happiness? Is it prosperity? Or inner peace? all these and more we are human once we have one thing we want another thing we grow as time goes by I think the only person who knows is the inner you just listen carefully to you and give you time you will know beautiful poem Thanks for sharing

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Jingga Hartono 23 March 2016

thank you for your time Dr. Tony for reading my poem.. i appreciate it ^^ keep reading and keep creating the new poem ^^

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 March 2016

What exactly are you looking for? Love? Success? Or both? Is it really what you want? Or Is it freedom? Is it happiness? Is it prosperity? Or inner peace? That you want.... life is a mystery......... take life as it comes. thank you for this poem. a bit philosophical. liked it very much. tony

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Jingga Hartono 27 March 2016

Thanks Mr. Ernest.. I hope my inner me can really tell me what I really want soon

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