Only a cynic can dismiss
This phenomenon as a
Rather mundane affair,
The ongoing alchemy of love,
In the lawns of sky.
When an infatuated cloud
Liquefied in the courteous tempo
Of his fiery romance
During a seductive season of rain,
While I nestled under a kiosk
A fascinated angel
Descended upon the rainbow
And forgot to return to paradise!
When an infatuated cloud Liquefied in the courteous tempo Of his fiery romance During a seductive season of rain, ...beautiful very beautiful...you know how to take readers with you to beautiful imaginery world....it surely is a superb write, thanks 10++++
This is a great imagery lu captured so beautifully. But I feel u could have used some other word instead of 'critic'; like 'skeptic'. Think over...10
You know the art of giving fine words to your beautiful thoughts and emotions... A beautfiful poem indeed... Regards, Kamran
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
GOD sends angels as helpers in life