One summer evening, the leaves dark and green
My heartfelt the music, that came from the trees
My eyes started searching, all through the green
Mild cool breeze blowing, swaying all the trees.
Neared as I more, the sound much clear
Excited was I, I thought my search over
I looked here and there, the sky was clear
Nothing in the air, not behind the trees, nor there over.
I sat on a rock, deep in thought
Still pounding upon the beat was my little heart,
The melody lingered still, deep in thought
Searching were my senses, longing was my heart.
Fluttering was my scarf, in the cool winds,
A drop from the sky, made me look high
The music grew thin, in the cool winds
My heart longing still and had hopes high.
The soil and the clime, and the cool evening breeze
The green and the orange, the grass and the sky
The sudden sweet smelling soil, brought by the breeze
Awakened were my senses, though dark got the sky.
Welcome is the change, welcome is the rain
Longing was the earth, longing was my heart
The music that was felt, were the droplets of rain
Still pounding upon the beat was my little heart.
To love nature and, to thank the Creator. Nice piece of work.
Such a beautiful drop of poem like sweet drops of rain from heaven, makes the heart longing more.With rhyme, rhythm and smooth word flow this music of rain is so refreshing.- - - - - - - Welcome is the change, welcome is the rain Longing was the earth, longing was my heart The music that was felt, were the droplets of rain Still pounding upon the beat was my little heart.
The soft sound of falling droplets is a welcome symphony in the peak of summer! The scent of newly wet soil is equally inviting! You have painted the evening in colours of green and crimson! The gentle breeze that accompanied the drizzle is enchanting!
Beautiful.. Rain.. The most beautiful music.. The most beautiful moment.. A blessing that almost all of us cherish n enjoy.. Thanks for sharing RAIN IN SUMMER so beautifully..
Excellent writing.......Neared as I more, the sound much clear Excited was I, I thought my search over I looked here and there, the sky was clear Nothing in the air, not behind the trees, nor there over............nice stanza.
Summer rains are more soothing like the poetry in rainy days. Nicely painted with your ink.10 ±+++
A beautiful description of summer rains, though rains are always pleasant but a summer rain is something more than pleasant.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
...........beautiful poem...I love rain on a summer's day ★