Rain Or Tears? Poem by elysabeth faslund

Rain Or Tears?

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Crackly tagging twigs
Tattling on the rain
Miced up in the skies...
Thin, thin disguise!

Catch me if you can!
Oly, Oly, kick the can!

Tween the clouds,
Grey the clouds,
Stay the clouds

Just a little longer,
Tad of time more.
Rain-set my eyes,
Then, let it pour...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 04 February 2008

A vivid delight. You can hear the twigs snap and the pattering of the rain even when your eyes tell that skies are clear.

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Sandra Fowler 24 January 2008

Completely captivating. The last stanza is superb. Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Broken Peaces 23 January 2008

I danced through that poem it was magical 10 impressed Chris

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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