The sun is no more, as the clouds start to show;
The heat gets cut, when the water starts to pour;
The dark hard ground is hard no more,
With the magical water seeping into its pores;
The trees are fresh and are very bright now,
With the sky water washing them inside out;
As I walk between the river and rail lines,
I can see little frogs kiss in no sunshine;
My ears can hear what my heart has to say,
That I must get drenched...Right away;
So wasting no time I jump inside
And get all wet like the water all around.
I count the raindrops that are falling on me,
But fail to keep up, as they are so many..
Water, oh! Water, I like to play with you
As you are with me and please always do..
Oh! It’s all so lovely, so beautiful and so tranquil
Feels like I’m floating in the heavens so peaceful.
I feel a change, a change in me
As my heart lies overpowered, with this wondrous rain shower
I hear a strong voice, the voice of rains
And I know instantly that I am not solitary again
This is my favorite part: So wasting no time I jump inside And get all wet like the water all around. I count the raindrops that are falling on me, But fail to keep up, as they are so many.. Great poem Shruti
As i read it, i could see the flow. I enjoy your writing. I am glad that you are willing to share these with us.
This was an amazing poem. My favorite part was: 'I feel a change, a change in me As my heart lies overpowered, with this wondrous rain shower I hear a strong voice, the voice of rains And I know instantly that I am not solitary again' LOVE it! A great write- keep it up! ~Ary
A poem with beautiful imageries and your have come up with a good piece showing your inside love for natural scenic and elegancies........wonderful........and rain is indeed a very attractive description which has always been worth reading..........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer
i have read many poems over the years and i recommen this one as one of the best.
Beautifully written, rain is such a good subject to write about.Excellent poem. Phebe
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i like the rain too. lol. excellent job.