hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 65,768 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Rainbow Disappear - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Rainbow disappeared
And colors dispersed
It was momentary joy
Never meant to joy

He was to pack anyway
Not caring for honest way
He may leave soon
She sees nothing but lost crown

Dream is shattered
As wishes are altered
No more hope of rain again
For causing ever more pain

Was there not color white?
Which advised not to fight?
Red may be called danger
But where was the anger?

I loved green color for peace
But life was not at an ease
I had to take liquor
To uphold honor


Comments about Rainbow Disappear by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 65,768 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/30/2014 9:07:00 AM)

    I love this so much. The usage of words for a color is amazing. All of it makes so much sense
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  • Gold Star - 65,768 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/30/2014 9:07:00 AM)

    Very good

    Mrinmoy Choudhury2 hours ago
    A great read - meaningful.
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  • Gold Star - 65,768 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/30/2014 9:06:00 AM)

    colours of joy.

    Robin Patir2 hours ago
    Very good.
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  • Gold Star - 65,768 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/30/2014 9:06:00 AM)

    Pleasant read.

    darran hardwick2 hours ago
    Enjoyable read. Liked the imagery and felt that it came from the heart.

    Well done.
    D.H. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 65,768 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/30/2014 6:50:00 AM)

    Rainbow disappeared
    And colors dispersed (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 30, 2014



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