Eddie Roa

Rookie (June 22,1942 / Manila. Philippines)

Rainy Days - Poem by Eddie Roa

Rain chatters annoyingly
An incessant harangue on metal sheets
Drums, grates, pesters my listlessness

A lackluster sun sinks ever so weakly
On a jagged silhouette of somber evergreens
Its gilt edge no more than erose rustiness

I remember the ugliness of the day
The slate gray of twilight taking over
Amidst the harassment of an obstinate rain


Comments about Rainy Days by Eddie Roa

  • Rookie - 129 Points Glenn Mark Amor (2/3/2009 9:32:00 PM)

    Good piece sir... beautiful poem (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 10 Points Alexandra Gray (2/3/2009 6:41:00 PM)

    Very nice piece..rainy days usually depict sorrow but nevertheless it is also my favorite since it is the perfect time for me to be alone in my room & ponder things on my own.+10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (2/2/2009 8:54:00 AM)

    Sometimes rainy days unwantedly prevail. I like the last stanza of the poem.
    Regards
    Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zaarah Jasmin (2/1/2009 10:33:00 PM)

    i strongly agree with krista, a 10..for you and thank u for sharing your thoughts.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Krista Churchill (2/1/2009 3:22:00 PM)

    nice piece i like you're thoughts

    Krista (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Desiree Burdick (1/29/2009 6:10:00 PM)

    rainy days= unhappiness
    love the poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 99 Points Umbelina Linhares Pimenta Frota Bastos (1/29/2009 2:09:00 PM)

    It is true, rainy days make us introspective and a bit unhappy. Great poem! Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Nimal Dunuhinga (1/29/2009 12:11:00 PM)

    Yes! Eddie, Rainy days bring much more notions to the solitary mind and turns into great poems.Good luck! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, April 26, 2010