Rain chatters annoyingly
An incessant harangue on metal sheets
Drums, grates, pesters my listlessness
A lackluster sun sinks ever so weakly
On a jagged silhouette of somber evergreens
Its gilt edge no more than erose rustiness
I remember the ugliness of the day
The slate gray of twilight taking over
Amidst the harassment of an obstinate rain
It is true, rainy days make us introspective and a bit unhappy. Great poem! Well done.
Very nice piece..rainy days usually depict sorrow but nevertheless it is also my favorite since it is the perfect time for me to be alone in my room & ponder things on my own.+10
Sometimes rainy days unwantedly prevail. I like the last stanza of the poem. Regards Naseer
i strongly agree with krista, a 10..for you and thank u for sharing your thoughts..
nice piece i like you're thoughts Krista
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes! Eddie, Rainy days bring much more notions to the solitary mind and turns into great poems.Good luck!