Random Poem by Elora Costan

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I was an alien in his world;
a no-beauty to behold,
random story untold-
made both of our worlds so cold.

Then goes my lonely soul,
helplessly walking down the hall;
reaching out a distant call,
waiting her heart to become a whole.

Half a heart taking a journey,
with the adversities she didn't foresee;
he ignored all her plea,
and she received no mercy!

Wednesday, December 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: heartache,unrequited love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 02 January 2017

The pain one suffers due to unrequited love. very nice.

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Rajnish Manga 30 December 2016

Deeply felt agony expressed honestly. A terrible experience where love does not beget love for superfluous reasons. It shows the hypocrisy of a man. Very poignant poem. Thanks for sharing. a no-beauty to behold, Half a heart taking a journey, with the adversities she didn't foresee;

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Elora Leanor 30 December 2016

I write to express :) Thanks!

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Elora Costan

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Cebu City, Philippines
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