Readers May Judge Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Readers May Judge

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Many times I have thought
With mind single handedly fought
It has found no solution
As mind was in firm resolution

I have freedom to write
But no liberty to fight
Over disagreement
About critical comments

How can I feel free?
When they all disagree
With my contents
And with flow of movement

I may be expressing
And stressing
On some points
With lots of precision hints

I can express freely
But they may disagree vehemently
Suggest some ways to improve
I shall have no power to disprove?

I may claim “it is me”
For personal opinion you may feel free
But you are really not
You may be wrongly caught

Readers may judge
But won’t budge
From their conclusion
You will have to remove confusion

Poetry is all about
Feelings with real way out
You may come out with puzzle
Readers may help you to come out of trouble

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 22 September 2013

Beautiful poem..if readers really help you to come out of trouble, then how wonderful it would have been...loved reading it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2013

Amen! ! ! Megan Mckinney5 minutes ago You my good sir, are a genius. Nicely said! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2013

Many times I have thought With mind single handedly fought

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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