There’s certain things you say
You can’t take back in any way.
Some things you regret for the rest of your life
Because you caused a loved one trouble or strife.
Why did I say that?
What did they do?
Did they say something evil
To deserve abuse from you?
No, they did nothing,
They’ve been simply great,
So you look to yourself,
It’s you you really hate.
You stare into your own eyes
Yet you see a stranger,
He’s angry and confused,
He poses real danger.
Your different, someone else,
Everyone sees.
I just want to go back
To the original me.
He wouldn’t hurt anyone,
He had no regret,
But how to get back to him,
That I forget...
This is very good Dean with a personal touch that transmits itself through your words, despite the lack of form it has a nice flow to it, keep writing Dean and remember to keep being original.
This is such a nice poem xD Do your best in writing the next ones to come! ^^
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your poem speaks beautifully to the reader. Some good rhymes throughout the poem. The ending was lovely... and full of regret?