Rejuvnate Spirit Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Rejuvnate Spirit

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Wednesday, January 10,2018
7: 13 AM

Rejuvnate spirit

Wednesday, January 10,2018
7: 13 AM

Heart needs not only beating with rhythm
But to cooperate with other parts as team
It is sentimental chamber
And we all remember it

Sometimes it needs direction
Coupled with kind actions
It cries and make you to smile as well
It has no restriction to reveal

But it needs calibration
To respond and act for human relation
It must react positively when needed
Some sorrows or joy has to be added

What makes one to shed tears?
Or create fears
And show visible features
That heart has developed some rupture

Don't allow strain to appear
And shed more tears
It is noticed easily
Heart must function smoothly

Rejuvnate Spirit
Tuesday, January 9, 2018
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Pathetic 09 January 2018

This poem has incorrect grammar and should not have been posted. Read Grammar#101. How this site has posted you as #106 out of the top 500 poets brings the site into disrepute.

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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