Relation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Relation

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You did stand by
Even if I had tried
And neglected many times
You stood as rock and proved in times

I did not care for love and affection
All that was proved with actions
I was known for anger and stupidity
You stood firmly and provided stability

It never occurred to me
What could have happened if you had left me free?
I know realize how correct you were!
I was not sensitive about what you stood for

Yes, it is good to know
About friends and foe
Not even relatives stand by when needed
Only free advice is rendered

Even we had only committed
The relation was on track and permitted
But we were not bonded yet
You still struck fast and got on

I look back and analyze
The bond is to be realized
The relation is to appreciated
It is how we move on totally committed

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 February 2014

Some of the habits are termed as dangerous They are considered bad if followed continuous

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 February 2014

a welcome mariecel remirez a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 February 2014

Scott Ransopher likes this. Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 February 2014

Nice Ben Ranft16 minutes ago Cool. Cheers! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 February 2014

Amazing Kat Dysinger16 minutes ago It really spoke to me, nice job Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 February 2014

good insight Beecher Brown15 minutes ago but hard to read. needs to be reworked and molded into a creation not a statement

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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