Relative Wind Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Relative Wind

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I came as a breath
take you to my tiny world
but you were trapped in a cobweb.
How do I rescue you?
I rolled as a wave
take you to shore
but you were hidden in the sea bed.
How can I rescue you?
I flew to the infinity like a bird
and take you out from the risk
but you were twinkling in your illusory sky.
Then only I realized that we are far away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 16 April 2006

This is vintage nimal dunuhinga. What more do I need to say? Except exceptional. Kind regards, Sandra

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Duncan Wyllie 16 April 2006

Wow! you are such a great writer of words, have you heard of the song called 'The Whole Of The Moon' I think that it was done by a group called, THE WATERBOYS this poem has reminded me so much of this great song, a beautiful piece of work again from you, Love Duncan

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