Vishal Sharma

Gold Star - 5,269 Points (10th July 1995/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

Religion, Why? - Poem by Vishal Sharma

the ultimate survivors on this green garden, to my God
they who survive tend to conquer this whole patch
vast green lush spreading here and here, who has provided this?
to my God, to my religion, I am asking again against them
what is religion? all are same, every man is equal
all are created by the unbiased hands of this powerful soul
but, we the humans, differentiated the humans-causing disparities
riots are the result of the difference between the mortal piece
humans are killing themselves-which religion allows this?
religion-a word that makes a human only two things-
helpless or a terrorist.

Comments about Religion, Why? by Vishal Sharma

  • Gold Star - 45,456 Points Valsa George (4/7/2013 11:41:00 AM)

    Man is created equal! But we divide ourselves into different sects in the name of ideologies and religion. Religion should be a connecting force between man and man and a way to God. Your young mind has such weighty thoughts. This poem is remarkable for your age! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 69,929 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/4/2013 1:23:00 AM)

    it would be good to delete the word religion from dictionary. good thought. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 307 Points Vijay Sai R (4/1/2013 5:33:00 AM)

    very good poem on religion... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,686 Points Hazel Durham (4/1/2013 4:23:00 AM)

    Wisdom beyond your years, a brilliant understanding of human nature, we ourselves create differences that causes so much harm in the name of religion! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,414 Points Leslie Philibert (4/1/2013 4:03:00 AM)

    Like the wisdom of this... (Report) Reply

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