Remembering You My Love Poem by Nirup Ranade

Remembering You My Love

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At night I see my phone
Waiting for the ringing tone

I imagine my love with a lovely smile
Who is away from me miles n miles

When u were in my arms
I would see your face with lovely charms

I am not a poet but still want to write
Because I am sitting here alone very quiet

We used to speak everyday for hours
Now I feel I am behind the bars

I know compromises to be made are five
But what’s the hell going in my life

Peeping into my past
I feel very lost

Hope the old days come back soon
It wills be like a life in moon

At night I see my phone
Waiting for the ringing tone

Many more things appear in my mind
I pray to god to be kind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arhoz Anvi 14 October 2008

nice nice nice Arhozie strawberry flavors

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Reshma Ramesh 14 October 2008

hmmm all the things we do when we are in love.....good luck with it...neat

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Ency Bearis 15 October 2008

great write/rhymes..narrated well.. Ency Bearis

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Seema Aarella 15 October 2008

Longing of the parted lover...expressed with depth and feel of new age, waiting for the electromagnetic waves that carry her tender voice! ! ! ! ! ! ! good write!

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Christina Weinke 14 October 2008

its lovely i would always remember it christina

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Rishi Menon 14 October 2008

Honest and Simple Poem. Straight from the heart. Very original. Keep up the good work. Ash (Rishi's Dad) .

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Lynda Robson 14 October 2008

Nice poem, Nirup, seems like you've got it bad, well done Lynda x

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