Sally Plumb Plumb

Freshman - 519 Points (23 9 1940 / Haverhill Suffolk England)

Retort


I shall only ask you once
he said.
If the answers no
our love is dead.

Then you must go
she did retort.
Self love is yours...
thrives in your thought.

Submitted: Friday, July 01, 2011
Edited: Monday, July 04, 2011
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  • Rookie - 0 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (7/1/2011 9:20:00 AM)

    Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4.
    Regards
    Akmal (Report) Reply

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