Revealing My Soul Poem by Kaila George

Revealing My Soul

Rating: 3.7


I stand on the abyss
Wondering what to do
But now I look forward
With no fears do you
Often I stood looking within
Wanting and praying
I will hide all my sins
I watched life go pass
Became a zombie I did
Breathing, moving, but lifeless within
Then suddenly shock
Through the mist and haze
Nightmares and fears
Slowly drifting away
But then a new fear
Hides deep within
Of finding the meaning
Of life’s mysteries
Should I take the first step?
Toward revealing my soul
Just to be picked
By the sinners anew
Picking and eating
Away at my soul
But this time I’m ready
For what happens to me
I take on the world
And all its mysteries

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
(De Va) 02 November 2011

So many mysteries are being revealed before our very eyes. Our souls have connected in a way that only sisters can understand. Take each new step knowing that I walk at your side, always there to pick you up should you fall. Together we walk this path before us, finding the source of the light...hugs n blessings sister

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 18 October 2011

the amazing thing in this poem is the spirit and courage that you are ready for the world and all that is in store on it be it good or bad wow, all your poems deserve ten plus plus votes you write so well

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Ben Burger 12 October 2011

You have amazing poetry. I really enjoy reading such beautiful words arranged to near perfection. Keep it up, you have talent

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