Rhapsody In Night Poem by Kevin Patrick

Rhapsody In Night

Rating: 5.0


A swarm of stars stirred plummeting
Beneath the ebony high tides
And August air was trembling
With carnal heat and vernal pride

The field still singed with verdant whiff
In sheaths of tangled wild swards
We sat listening to bladed glyph's
To the green churches of crickets' chorus

And summers thirsty humid paws
Kept our desires from hesitation
in a bed of grass, the earth threw applauds
Under a blanket of constellations

And the night slipped out the milky way
Melting us in rhapsody from these bars of clay

Tuesday, August 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: summer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 25 August 2020

A poem of the surrealistic genre where irrational images are blended together. For me it is always difficult to explicate such poems! Images like 'summer's thirsty humid paws' 'ebony high tides', 'carnal heat', 'bars of clay'..... all very powerful and suggestive images! I would love if the poet could explain what all he has meant! All I know is that only a poet of calibre can write such a poem!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 August 2020

A well authored composition. Truly splendid.....10+++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 August 2020

high kevin make a HATRICK

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 August 2020

Wild imagination, rich expressions, in a well written piece. Nice to read your words after a long gap.

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