Theodora (Theo) Onken

Freshman - 639 Points (Washington State)

Riddle Rap~ - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Socket taps
Electrical gaps
And whatever in between
No privacy
Just lunacy
Heard but rarely seen;

Socket taps
G.E. maps
And conversation's heard
No man's castle
Only a big hassle
In the home of the Word Bird;

Socket taps
Garden Snaps
Hidden out of sight
Back yard green
No in between
Thanks Be To The Light! ;


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Our Daily Life In Rap

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By, Theodora Onken

May 22,2013

Comments about Riddle Rap~ by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • Freshman - 639 Points Theodora Onken (5/23/2013 8:41:00 PM)

    Thank you David for your kind words! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (5/23/2013 4:56:00 PM)

    A sparkling little gem of a poem. I loved it: -) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 639 Points Theodora Onken (5/22/2013 3:26:00 PM)

    Thank you Paul. Your words mean a lot to me. Also, the fact that you even read my poetry means everything. : O) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,442 Points Paul Brookes (5/22/2013 3:09:00 AM)

    Good poem I know its a rap but after all it's a kind of poetry, well yours is and beautifully penned. 10/10 BB : O) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 22, 2013


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