Ripple Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Ripple

Rating: 5.0


Walking around the words
'where are you? '
from the circle of my heart,
growing wider,
as a ripple,
gentler in the outer part.

Soon, without flow,
in the calm,
you will find some other me
that holds you
in another time -
happily saying
'here are we.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Once again Sally, I really like your imagery. I can see the ripple from your heart and the last stanza is a lovely compromise. 10 love Karin

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Seema Chowdhury 09 October 2009

very nice poem with a good flow. take care pl see some of my new poems if time permits Dwell in my soul pg1 Watch the magic happen pg3

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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