Rise Poem by ajith patnaik
Rise
'grow silently' says a plant'.
flourish while u grow' is the inner meaning of it.
where there lies a defeat, there we hear
a silent sound marking the traces of victory.
where u shed aspirations like seeds,
there u see the new buds of hope starting to grow.
gods will bend their heads with shame
looking at your heart and courage.
they will shed a tear remembering
the pain u went through.
when you crush a flower,
it gives u sweet fragrance.
that is what we call 'forgiveness'
paint your character with such principles
raise and never sit down, watch people passing by.
no matter how dark a night is, there always comes a day.
there always comes day when the flowers bloom,
there always comes a day when
the seeds of your efforts germinate.
be the beginning of an impossible end
DONT GIVE UP
INSPIRING...BEAUTIFUL write... beautiful lines lightly touched my heart..... beautiful painted in my imagination... written from deep within your heart.... .............KEEP ON WRITING.............
This is a very thought provoking poem and ends in wisdom. You bring out the necessity to stay positive and it is artfully weaved from your pen. Karin Anderson
That's a very meaningful poem that i have enjoyed Keep up the good work! ! 10.
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I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 8:37:37 PM # 1.0.0.1119
This is so inspirational and touching. I loved the way you use the theme of a seed to bring forth plants an hope. 'crush a flower it gives sweet fragrance, that is what we call forgiveness. This is a poem of wisdom which one would not expect to find from someone your age. Excellent! 10 Karin Anderson