hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 44,557 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Rosy Flower - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

She is Miss Rosy Flower
Really beautiful and happier
I find her in good mood
She is the only one in neighborhood

Her walk is with elegance
It is really a chance
To watch her move
For theories to disprove

I shall not narrate
Or relate
Her physical appearance
But real human at once

I find her kind
With benevolent approach in mind
She takes care of destitute and poor
Visiting door to door

She has been blessed with plenty
That is gift from almighty
She has chose he path of charity
To the welfare and service of humanity

I term her as goddess
Always bearing smile on face
As if conveying the message
You shall face the fate in old age

Prepare for next birth
But nicely live and breathe
This life is god gift
Never to be wasted with hate or rift

* Rosy Flower is imagery character *


Comments about Rosy Flower by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/23/2014 9:23:00 PM)

    Nice


    Matt Griffin3 minutes ago
    I like the use of charity and kindness is world so despair
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  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/23/2014 9:22:00 PM)

    Great use of description


    Jair Massiah2 minutes ago
    Lovely words used to describe this character Rosy. Is she human, goddess or flower? The poet paints it wonderfully and leaves it up to the interpretation of the reader. There are a few grammatical errors, but that is easily fixed! ;) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 23, 2014



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