Rubaiyat - On Love.. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Rubaiyat - On Love..

Rating: 5.0


Love is a deep sea and mirage in desert
no swimmer has ever crossed or reached oasis
nor found the pearls of peace
or inner tranquility and contentment.

Thursday, October 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: rubaiyat
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Mayo 23 October 2015

A bleak outlook on love, but if that's not a viewpoint made for poetry, nothing is. I like your poem.

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Sanjukta Nag 23 October 2015

Sad one, still amazing as usual.10+

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T Rajan Evol 25 October 2015

Deep sea and desert with oasis..Great thought wise wor Asim.

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Valsa George 23 October 2015

There is pleasure and pain in love! Sometimes it is like an unfathomable sea, sometimes elusive as a mirage in the desert! You have really captured the complexity of love in these lines!

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Rajnish Manga 23 October 2015

Love is a wonderful phenomena. Sometimes, it brings to us the biggest of joys and on others, it looks like an illusion, an unreal world, an insatiable thirst. Very well said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

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Loke Kok Yee 23 October 2015

beautifully sad but the pleasure is in the trying Thanks Asim-10++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2015

Yes you have truly realized. Love is definitely a deep sea. Very interesting composition shared...10

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