Sadness Of The Heart Poem by Isabella Swan

Sadness Of The Heart

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The sun has set the light has been forgotten.
The flowers in the field have fallen to the ground.
For there is no light to keep them off the ground.
Leaves have fallen off the tree.
Mother Nature gives no light.
But only the sun may give the world full of light.
This has not affected anyone.
But the sun will never rise again for this poor man.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

It's a very beautiful piece, though heartbreakingly sad... I think you could add a second stanza to lighten up it's mood and write about volcanic warmth reviving 'this poor man's' heart so that he gets rid of his insecurities and stops worrying...

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Isabella Swan

Isabella Swan

Georgetown, Guyana
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