Sadness Remains Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Sadness Remains

Rating: 5.0


I feel alone and lonely
This feeling has come lately
I have lot more to feel
Sadness remains with me still

What was now store?
No pleasure any more
She is far away in distant land
“In heaven” call all the friends

“Mom where are you” son asks
To console him is the biggest task
I have no ready made answer
I face cold and shiver

I find reflection on his face
He is exact replica with traces
Of her mother and looks lovely
I have become very much fond lately

He questions with quick intent
To see mom with him and present
Before his eyes to play
I cry silently not to show any way

Am I responsible for sad plight?
Her absence was shock and not right
We were not prepared and unaware
How could I tell him all these and dare

“Mom will be back dear”
Be calm and have no fear
I move my hand over his head
He stares at my face to read

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 February 2014

I feel alone and lonely This feeling has come lately

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 February 2014

???? ?appa likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Savita Tyagi 10 February 2014

Lovely poem. A feeling of sadness expressed so well. Thanks for sharing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 February 2014

Post Excellent Elegy Dhal Bahadur Jirel " Ravi" 15 minutes ago Dear sire my words are less to review thi poem. A great tribute. regards Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 February 2014

Emotional yadush bose16 minutes ago Can feel the distress and pain in the poem Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 February 2014

Powerful Paul Clappison15 minutes ago Clearly this has come from a very personal place, and it has a powerful resonance because of that. Thoughts are with you all; peace and love.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 February 2014

Rohani Daud Wow..it's very beautiful poem.. love it.. about a minute ago · Unlike · 1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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