Same With Number Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Same With Number

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Gone was the year 2k eleven
Coming of the year is 2k twelve
We will count same with numbers
Try to forget past and never remember

Some one said “human is to err”
Some one remarked “we are no where”
We are just pawn in time game
Almighty is there to be blamed

“How almighty responsible for our misery”?
I could only express my helplessness and pity
How can I leave everything to our creator?
When we have everything to enjoy and share?

I hear the chanting words from hymns
Words are composed by black headed man
“We may live only with your grace”
Grant us all wisdom to raise head and face

Such things we daily reiterate but not practice
Daily commit words but withdraw the promises
Bring almighty in between and proclaim on his name
No where we stand committed and share the blame

Let us try our level best
Dash against wall as if appearing test
If nothing comes out of it then give second thought
Don’t leave field until you are imprisoned or caught

You can certainly have reason to ask for pardon
As work was executed beyond limit and done
You have sufficient reasons to feel satisfaction
It is inner feeling with all kind of positive indication

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 January 2012

Ashraful Musaddeq Let us try our level best Dash against wall as if appearing test If nothing comes out of it then give second thought Don’t leave field until you are imprisoned or caught- love it sir Hasmukh Amathalal a few seconds ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 January 2012

Rebecca Soto Tillack Wonderful, Hasmukh ♥ 7 hours ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2012

Maisie 2012.01.08 16: 42 As much as humanity will strive (and often it doesn't!) we will always remain that - human. But that should not stop us from trying to improving. Sorry I don't comment on many of your pieces Jadia but I always seem to be rushing and end up picking off the shorter poems - bad habit - but very human! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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