~ Scoop Slowly Be Not Edgy Nervy ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Rhymic…flossy…hah hah…such a romantic appeal who dares to be ‘edgy’ and ‘nervy’…cordial invitation for ‘Bask bloomy blushy sonsie curvy.’… alluring…enticing… Yeah Nivy we got such passionate poetries from you…brings a dancing duo of romance…irresistible… 10++ AB London

when you have eight different words that you have to explain then the poem is not the same. let the reader follow you, this is what i see that you have to do.

I agree with Louis, the glossary should be intergrated into the poem. I really don't have the time to study the glossary to be able to understand your poems. Having said that It became quiet a sexy poem, I think. See ya Lynn

Wordplay at it's finest. You have such a way of playing words on your reader. It's like they float on air and yet you retain deep meaning. I like the line; Muse mull as flossy. It's a great write thank you so much for sharing.

It reminds me of a knickerbocker glory.Delicious.

Good leisure time read… ‘Cioccolato ~ Finery’ wow! Love it as metaphor…why be topsy turvy to ‘mull and muse’ ‘ flossy’ damsel ‘Nivy Nivy’ …we’re not edgy nor nervy… Long live ‘Carnival of Cioccolato ~ Finery’ ...yummy yummy…lolol 10+

‘Go-Gay’ type poetry…teen emotion flowing in many rubicund rills… Use of some uncommon words added beauty and vibe galore...aptly and indeed. Actually a poet can give a low percentage of total feelings and here if one asks for surrogate words [simple words] …well poets feelings will be further strangled… and smothered…… By the way use of glossary is debatable… I’ve read comments on poetries of this poet with mixed reaction….on use glossary… Personally I love the glossary …which helped me reach meaning of lesser used words easily and then final blending I do myself… 10++

whats the need of writing poetry if a dictionary is to be put along with the writing! It is better to write in common words if the content of saying is very strong with the feelings and realisation. If not, then we will take it as a rhythmic lullaby or like that. When I read the poem first time, without looking at your supplied glossary, a meaning was there. But after reading the glossary, I have lost the energy of understanding the writing. Every writing should have to carry the meaning, I don't believe it. Sometimes some senseless talks should be applied in poetry, otherwise the poetic page in the long run will be a market-place of necessary talkings. And we will simply try to walk in the skyline-bridge towards the depthless infinity. Regards, 10+(for not understanding all the meaning but rhythm touched me) Apoet Bangla