Theodora (Theo) Onken

Freshman - 749 Points (Washington State)

Sea Of Discontent~ - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

It was an envious night
All tattered in green
The two-eyed monster - disturbed
Feeling it's ragefull & mean;
It was a no happy ever afters - night
Split and bent - out of place
A general electric - radio waves -kind of night
All sewn up in the viscous toxin's lace;
It was a dare you to even try it 'manually' kind of night
Where the moon & stars lit up the darkened sky
It was guided by: SOS - this hapless mess
The sailor's lost on the sea - longing to fly ever high;
It was an abyss kind of stormy night - indeed
The utter tragic of the deeps darkest infinity
It was the green - eyed monster kind of night
An unholy tempest tossed in the gravest of envy;


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By, Theodora Onken

May 21,2013

Comments about Sea Of Discontent~ by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • Freshman - 749 Points Theodora Onken (5/23/2013 8:49:00 PM)

    Glad you liked this David. This really wasn't about stormy weather though! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 749 Points Theodora Onken (5/23/2013 8:44:00 PM)

    Thank you David. Glad you liked this; actually this really wasn't a write about the weather but more the the mood of this time; (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (5/23/2013 5:00:00 PM)

    We don't seem to get really stormy weather these days. At least here in Swansea. Perhaps its climate change. Lovely poem. Have you read any of my sonnets yet? (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 749 Points Theodora Onken (5/21/2013 4:03:00 AM)

    Gajanan,
    Thank you. Glad you liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/21/2013 2:05:00 AM)

    very good one, powerful. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 21, 2013


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