See How Bright The Stars? Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

See How Bright The Stars?

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I'm going to sweep you up in my arms,
With a thrust unknown to you.
Overpowering all of your objections,
With a gushing love I have that's true!
I do.
Hang on tight...
Don't let go.
The wind is breezy!
Don't look down...
Or you will want to return!
I wish to take you to another place.
Where I know the smile you suppress...
Will shine upon your face!
You deserve to be uplifted to heights,
To experience all that you are...
Without fears of being correct or right!
With me,
Hang on tight...
See how bright the stars?




Note:
To me, this poem is saying:
'Let me take you
From where you are,
To uncover all possibilities
That can be manifested.
Let go! Trust and believe! '
~LSP~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diane Violet 17 October 2006

You say it so well that one is able to see all the possibilities if they trust and believe. All the best, Diane

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We do see. The added note confirms what we see. This is powerful, come-into-my/our-world, stuff. Masterfully composed. Sigh... (a good one) .... t x

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