See Me Cry Poem by danyelle tedrow

See Me Cry



How can you stand there and wach me cry and say you care wene you are the one that made me cry how can you say you im beautiful wene you gave me these scares how can you call your self a man wene you beat on a women how can you live with your self and the thing I ask my self every day is how can I still live with you

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sad abuse
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Moha Abbou 29 August 2012

A lot of mistake Sister try to correct them.

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Tori Godwin 31 May 2012

I believe, and please tell me if I am wrong, that there is still a part of you that loves him and that's why you hold on. You want to believe he will change into a good man that loves you dearly and stops scarring you both emotionally and physically. The poem was very good, I could feel the emotion. I can't tell you what to do in this situation because i don't have the right to unless you directly ask me. All I can say is, never lose hope that things can get better, but also know when certain thing must end. Have a good day! :)

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Rajendran Muthiah 23 April 2012

Till you continue to live with him, you will be inspired to write emotionally appealing poems. Wait and see if he changes.

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