Senryu - 17 (Concave Love) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Wonderful imagery. A beautiful poem having deep speculation. Thanks for sharing.....10

I appreciate this poem for its wonderful imagery and idiom. Feeling of love is overwhelming. Thanks for sharing.

Straight, as the crow flies ....Liked the simili Crashed into my heart.........Heart pierced with love arrow now replaced with another imagery...Heart with heart. I am in deep sea.........No where to go and no way to escape (No escape route) Wonderful haiku to read and analyse. Full marks Mr. Asim..

Totally fallen in love.

Another lovely Senryu Dorothy Singing Still

i 'loved' the first two lines, though i generally do not aim toward love poems if i can help it! BUT the third line threw me. what does it mean, i wonder. i haven't come up with an answer. bri :)

That's an amazing poem.Beautiful imagery dear!

A concave lens may be a convex on on the other side, view depends on the combined focal length of two sides.