Straight, as the crow flies
your love crashed into my heart
I am in deep sea.
I appreciate this poem for its wonderful imagery and idiom. Feeling of love is overwhelming. Thanks for sharing.
Straight, as the crow flies ....Liked the simili Crashed into my heart.........Heart pierced with love arrow now replaced with another imagery...Heart with heart. I am in deep sea.........No where to go and no way to escape (No escape route) Wonderful haiku to read and analyse. Full marks Mr. Asim..
i 'loved' the first two lines, though i generally do not aim toward love poems if i can help it! BUT the third line threw me. what does it mean, i wonder. i haven't come up with an answer. bri :)
A concave lens may be a convex on on the other side, view depends on the combined focal length of two sides.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful imagery. A beautiful poem having deep speculation. Thanks for sharing.....10
Thank u so so much....