Senryu - 70 (Love Equation) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 70 (Love Equation)

Rating: 5.0


The love you give is
equal to the love you take
this equation goes on.

Friday, November 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 06 November 2015

This is a lovely Senryu! I see a perfect equation between the two that will lead to an abiding relationship! A 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2015

There is balance in love giving and receiving in equal opportunity. A lovable poem shared with amazing lines.10

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Sanjukta Nag 06 November 2015

True love always has this equation. Sad ending for the one sided love. Great write as usual.10++

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Paul Warren 06 November 2015

A bit like John Lennon. Nice one.

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