Senryu- Coronavirus Poem by Valsa George

Senryu- Coronavirus

Rating: 5.0


The demon is out
Dances with a crown on head
Spitting fire and fume

Senryu- Coronavirus
Friday, March 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dilemma,fear,panic
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Syllables- 5-7-5
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 29 March 2020

A true picture of prevailing crisis in your wonderful poem 10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2020

Three brilliant lines that depict the evilness of Corona virus. Superb imagery as always. Excellent Senryu.

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Mj Lemon 25 March 2020

A very timely reminder of evil, and the forms it can take. How can something so small wield so much power? I am reminded of the saying, " the devil is in the details." Superbly written, Valsa.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 March 2020

A timely contribution. Reminds me YATA YATA HI DHARMASYA..... verses of Bhagavat Geeta. God has His purpose behinf every flash. Let us hope for the best.....10 Shiva's Tandav dance of death and destruction aims for new creation, this one? Demonic is an apt description for a novel corona virus causing pandemonium. THANKS TO ALL THESE GREAT POETS KEEP FAITH ALIVE

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 March 2020

Wonderful expression about Coronavirus// Make home quarantine Be Isolated with the poetic power Lit up the light of healthy on universal winds Let the covid-19 run on empty field Let the covid-19 be tired lonely Let the covid-19 die hard without rebirth...........

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Soran M. H 25 August 2020

............. Spitting fire and fume................

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Soran M. H 25 August 2020

this masterpiece is contain very imaginative poetic metaphor, short and alive...excellent 10++

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Harindhar Reddy 19 April 2020

Yes the demon took form of Corona with a motive to kill humans with its fume and fire. It's on fire and going on hammer and tongs gifting death.👌👌👌👌 well written verse.10++ rated verse!

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Anjandev Roy 13 April 2020

Well written senryu........thank u. anjandev roy.

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Budhashaya Behera 09 April 2020

Danger of demonic Corona virus is wonderfully expressed in few lines. We should pray to God. He can only save us...10+

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