Senryu- Family Chain Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Senryu- Family Chain
dewdrops of desires
made an icicle around
trapped inside a life
netted relations
together, a family
a bunch to enjoy
we stay together
In sorrow and happiness
like a tree on ground
dewdrops of desires---gorgeous wording..... it begs to be reread again and again--that is the power of a poetic pen! ! ! 5 stars but it deserves a skyfull of stars
Nicely crafted one and with deep philosophical essence... Congrats! Stay safe /PC
A wonderful Senryu that captures the very essence of family. Brilliantly crafted. Liked the ultimate stanza. To my Poem List.
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netted relations together, a family a bunch to enjoy we stay together In sorrow and happiness like a tree on ground----A wonderful poem about family, that is bonded through joy and sorrow.