Senryu- My Dates! Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Senryu- My Dates!



comes one at midnight
staying hours twenty four
leaves comes number two!

01 05 08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 02 May 2008

and today this two flourished, but will leave the post for three tonight...we count and lay waste our calenders which were made with such zeal.....

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Deepti Agarwal 05 May 2008

:) .... nice topic fr a haiku...n u did justice..

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Usha Pisharody 18 May 2008

Nice pun, better haiku, great expression!

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Sandra Martyres 01 October 2009

A very clever one indeed...great write Kesav.

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Sonya Florentino 20 September 2009

Ha ha, Kesav, rarely does a haiku make me laugh... i like this one...the double entrendre... maybe you should call them your hot dates! ! !

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 May 2009

Beautiful

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a clock in that write

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Subbaraman N V 13 June 2008

If we are conscious of this truth, we will lead a more purposeful life!

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