indira babbellapati

Rookie - 71 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Senryu Once Again - Poem by indira babbellapati

Promises are high
Thick black clouds on the sky
Winds, sly!

It makes us
Jump, leap, up down
Heart, with its own tact!

Ur silence unlocks
My questions unstated
Answers abound


Comments about Senryu Once Again by indira babbellapati

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/7/2013 10:52:00 AM)

    use of pun and shadowy words used so beautifully/Ur silence unlocks, My questions unstated, Answers abound
    Unuttered uttered many thing nice to read thank (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,262 Points Shahzia Batool (8/30/2013 2:36:00 PM)

    for image and rhyming:

    Promises are high
    Thick black clouds on the sky
    Winds, sly!
    - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    for a specific feel:

    It makes us
    Jump, leap, up down
    Heart, with its own tact!
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    for phrases:

    Ur silence unlocks
    My questions unstated
    Answers abound - - - - - - Beautiful! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,710 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/25/2013 6:37:00 AM)

    Questions unstated
    Answers abound
    Now we seek questions that match answers. Beautifully expressed. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,860 Points Dave Walker (8/24/2013 5:48:00 AM)

    Short and sweet, a great poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 26, 2013


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