Senryu - Regrets Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Regrets

Rating: 5.0


a lonely darkness
wanders the thicket forest
in full of regrets

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 22 September 2020

Regrets are a part and parcel of life. Never allow to seep into your life. Nice senryu.10+

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 September 2020

a thought-provoking senryu very amusing 5 stars

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Varsha M 22 September 2020

Lonely darkness in thick forest full of regret......what a beautiful plot. Message of loneliness that brought regret. Beautiful haiku.

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Soran M. H 22 September 2020

This is an elegant indirect language for writing poetry, as man and his pronouns are absent within this text, but things express the human world and the feelings and message of the poet, so the darkness and the forest are two symbols in this poem and have been used as a beautiful metaphor, well done with 5 stars

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Juhaina Tumlu 22 September 2020

Excellent Senryu....5 stars

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Deluke Muwanigwa 22 September 2020

Easy M.A.N. It sounds like bush fires ravaging Wisconsin, Australia etc. Am i right?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2020

Darkness is just like thickness of forest. Wonderful expression makes this poem special work! Sun will sprinkle light soon to remove darkness. Thank you for sharing! ..full 5 stars!

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 September 2020

loneliness living terrible wood in crowded all water isn't life!

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