Senryu Series ~ 9 (Broken Wings) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu Series ~ 9 (Broken Wings)

Rating: 5.0


The broken wings of
an emperor dragonfly.
Surprise feast for ants.

Fallen from his dreams
reached realities,
now working harder.

with shattered love life,
she took human services,
many lives salvaged.

Thursday, September 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: broken
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This Senryu deals with a broken wing of a dragon fly.....for ants it is a surprise feast, a loss of someone is gain for another....similarly when the love life ended she devoted her life to serve human and by doing this supreme service many human lives got benefitted.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 07 September 2015

All three are beautiful, the first being the best! A 10

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M Asim Nehal 08 September 2015

Thanks much, I appreciate your comments.......

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Sanjukta Nag 04 September 2015

Thoughtful.. the poem is a symbol itself.. thank you..10

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