Senryu ~ Trace Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu ~ Trace

Rating: 5.0


wind blows some leaves on
the silent tombstone boulder
memory echoes

Thursday, June 24, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 24 June 2021

The echoes of a grave. What a moment you caught there!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 June 2021

It has a wonderful brilliance Bravo!

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Deepak S S 24 June 2021

Majestic Senryu.... I admire your creativity

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 June 2021

What a wonderful image that speaks deeply to the core of the heart. Very touching. Toy Poem List.

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Varsha M 24 June 2021

Yes winds always brings memories. And rustle of leaves always have to tell a story. Beautiful sirji

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Suzon Albert 26 June 2021

Kudos! ! ! ! Well thought.

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Darren Jkoeryo 26 June 2021

Good, you left for the readers to interpret. wind blows some leaves on the silent tombstone boulder memory echoes

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 June 2021

Absolutely Memory echoes, Mr. Asim Sir! Powerfully worded 5 Stars!

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Zoyza Da Vinka 25 June 2021

Fantastic senryu.

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Memories echo with powerful words of this dynamic poem, dear Asim ji....Great!

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