Your eyes do tease me
playing games full of mischief.
haunt me in my dreams.
senryu, less tricky than original form of haiku but to make such an impact with only 3 lines - need pretty big skill, Heather has it. she did.
Eyes convey all emotions and show up in dreams. Beautiful poem.
wow, this best in all haiku poems i've seen yet, full of teases, lovely and sweet..i'll rate it a +10
Very nice, Some eyes can be so captivating we never forget them.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You convey the language of the eyes in a fascinating way as expected by you...creative indeed...regards