sandra brown wright

Rookie (10 20 73 / lancaster ca)


A warm sensation fills my body,
my heart races with every touch,
the softness of your voice soothes my soul,
As I lay here hoping the moment will never end,
calling out for you,
praying that you'll never let me go,
the sensation is so strong,
slowly I fade in and out of reality,
In an instant the warm sensation fades away,
my heart is empty,
my soul is torn apart and now the sensation of fear of what's to come,

Submitted: Tuesday, January 20, 2009
Edited: Saturday, July 18, 2009

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Comments about this poem (sensation by sandra brown wright )

  • Rookie . . (1/21/2009 1:26:00 AM)

    almost nothing can compare to the completeness felt when one connects with another human being on a level above all others (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Indira Babbellapati (1/21/2009 1:04:00 AM)

    how our mind and heart become the centre stage of this drama of life enacted through us! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eddie Roa (1/20/2009 2:42:00 AM)

    How joyful is the presence of the beloved but the absence of a loved one creates insecurity that's as ominous as a threatening storm. (Report) Reply

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