Serenity Poem by Noel Horlanda
Serenity
When air is lost
You and I can’t breathe
Then becomes ghosts
And all is lost
When the wind is gone
You and I can’t feel it
And be a bygone
Then everything is gone
Go up a mountain summit
There you've peace
Flinches sings sonnets
Hear its songs at summit
Dive in seven seas
Hardly hear a thing under
Only perhaps buzzing bees
Tranquility at seas
Here comes death
There is peace indeed
You’re no longer in debt
‘Cause life erased by death
You’re certain to vain
But rest in serenity
Not to disdain
Hence, only in vain
When it comes to all these
You and I achieves
serenity at least
no more wild as beast
Serenity, everyone seeks it, and I enjoyed your poem, Noel. I liked your A-B-C-A rhyme scheme too.
The world should not be polluted and contaminated by some countries and people's greed because; When air is lost You and I can’t breath Then becomes ghosts And all is lost Beautiful but worrisome poem.........10/10. Best Wishes Naseer
I truly agree with Shy[ana] on this one. I love the style you have. Please take the time to read my poem, Stop Time, I think we have a mutual understanding on the topic, though a slightly different deliverance. .Char.
I really like this poem. It has a certain flow to it and an interesting pattern of rhyme and repetition. The meaning of it is also very unique and grasping. a fine piece of work in my opinion. =] ~Shyana K~<3 ps- ive been studying a lot of different varieties of poems to work on my flow. thanks again
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM on Serenity! Serenity....When the wind is gone..mountain summit....Tranquility at seas....comes death There is peace indeed...rest in serenity... all these is the sum and substance. Voted 10+