Noel Horlanda

Rookie (Sep 12,1941 / Bohol, Philippines)

Man Of Sorrows - Poem by Noel Horlanda

Come into this world
Oh naked child
Cry not for mater’s love
Innocent you
What wou’d happen?
Your future we know not yet
Worry not for pater prepares
Your way, your world

Old enough tender as me
Oh open child
See the blue planet, tell me
Yeah, dark eyes in tears
Now you know
More tears to come
Wish I was nev’r born

Expect no exaltation
This ruthless earth
Human race who’s against you
No firewall could stand
D’forces of corruption
Oh Man of sorrows
Despised, rejected

Brought as a lamb
Oh poor child
Only to be slaughtered
In this brutal world
A sheep before his shearers
Laid on altar of rock
For mankind’s iniquities
Transgressions

Done no violence
No deceit in his mouth
Yet offered his life
To save his race
Annihilation from sin
Righteous servant is he
Shall be satisfied at the end


Comments about Man Of Sorrows by Noel Horlanda

  • Rookie Mubeen Sadhika (9/29/2009 12:48:00 AM)

    Profound thought. Nicely composed. great narration. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,963 Points Marieta Maglas (9/26/2009 4:02:00 PM)

    wonderful rational poem, well penned with deep thoughts, lovely to read......10++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,631 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (9/22/2009 8:07:00 PM)

    Poetic poignancy expressed with stunning eloquence....Stanzaic movement glides mellifluously...Solid crafting, indeed!

    FjR (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 270 Points Kesav Easwaran (9/22/2009 12:09:00 AM)

    'Brought as a lamb
    Oh poor child
    Only to be slaughtered
    In this brutal world,
    A sheep before his shearers'...

    These lines are meaningful expressive poetic...beautiful poem Noel...both in its philosophy and in composition...thanks...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rosalinda Martinez (9/19/2009 11:55:00 AM)

    And goodness shall prevail! Sir, your poem tells the truth about the world... very beautiful! Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,818 Points Rachel Ann Butler (9/17/2009 2:45:00 PM)

    Come into this world
    Oh naked child.

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2009 6:41:00 AM)

    Done no violence
    No deceit in his mouth
    Yet offered his life
    To save his race
    Annihilation from sin
    Righteous servant is he
    Shall be satisfied at the end...........no words may portray the childhood. we consider it so innocent age we always wish it to come back... nice piece and masterly stroke....10

    read mine innocence regained.... martyres...smiley (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (9/15/2009 3:31:00 AM)

    WOW! Noel you amazed me with this theme so eloquent yet well formed and structured.............great figurative language used! ! ! 10++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (9/14/2009 7:02:00 AM)

    this poem deserve an applause! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (9/14/2009 4:39:00 AM)

    this is too beautiful noel..as if i want to cry for this.i cant express my admiration for this poem, , this is a very kind poem..a very sensitive and a very adorable to read..this is transparent, we could see how innocents are to be slaughtered...only to find out that innocence saves hearts..this is a confession written in a form of verse..i like this much, promise... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 14, 2009



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